I saw some gameplay on phub sounds like a promising game wishing for the update thou. Love the storyline thou' even without the seggs part I think this game will get a thousand of playersl at steam
Very unique in its approach to the genre. Humorous but well-placed to maintain tension. Interesting but not contrived. Some plot twists are risky but I applaud this! Characters seem well written and interesting so far. Protagonist too, even - rare to see!
Some typos. Dialogue might be from a non-native English-speaker? Very minor gripe and I am extremely picky about this kind of thing.
So sick of seeing the same copy-paste games one after another. Glad I gave this one a shot! Really enjoyed it so far. I'm looking forward to what comes next.
NTR is when a woman systematically cheats on a man, while the man becomes aware of it. I specifically wrote cheating because the MC will be able to cheat on his chosen one. Not the opposite.
Tbh, i just played this for the first time thinking it will be "your generic VN", a guy with some girls and you know the drill dude. but actually it turned to be way better than what i initially thought, i like the fact that the mc "for once" is actually an interesting character. the renders are great and the story is very good so far, i'll definitely keep a close eye for future updates
I feel it's off to a great start but as noted by another player, there's some seriously wonky text. There are passages that makes no sense and conversations that seem to be translated into english via Google. You have a potentially really good VN here but it needs a native english translator.
High quality content so far, so many games misses the mark on the MC. you have written a great MC! lovely girls too :D! cant wait to see what happens next
It will not be a harem in the literal sense of the word.
At a certain point, the main character will approach the period of time when he will have the opportunity (depending on the player choice) to be in a relationship with all the girls at the same time without them knowing of MC infidelity. So the harem in this case is a very technical expression and just a fitting tag.
New story with new characters. Both are looking good. Very few grammar issues, nothing to take away from the story line. Not many choices to start out with but it feels like the developer is creating his story/game and needs certain steps to happen in order to make it all work. Likely updates will have more choice matters decisions. Worth a walk through.
I generally like where the story is going (or at least where it appears to be going), but reading the dialogue/monologue is like attempting to decipher a foreign language. So damned difficult, and sometimes it makes no sense at all. I keep thinking to myself, "damn, how I could help this developer with the language." This does need someone to completely edit the sentences so that the great scenes and renders come together more cohesively. As it stands, I am giving this a 6 out of 10, and can only hope the developer opts to have proficient native English speakers edit the written portion of this VN.
Huh, never expected a reply from the creator. To be honest that should've been obvious, guess I kinda gunned that thought down before it even appeared.
I keep getting update notifications for this game, but the version is still 0.0.2 for all of them, and I don't see any change log here either. Is it really being updated with new content, or is it just bugs being fixed and stuff like that?
Good work so far! I really loved the character development with the MC. Getting into his perspective is making this a great read. Just clean up on some language and punctuation (Editing help?) and this will be a hit. Keep it up and looking forward to more!
yup. Agreed. Punctuation and language issues can be bothersome and take away from the great story and art. Great editors are out there. English Writing major right here, and I guarantee others are SMEs, too. We’d be happy to assist bringing this to next level. Cheers!
Flipping fantastic so far, pretty good for just an intro.. Quality is great and I'm already invested.. Cant wiat to see how the development of of MCs relationship with Sidney unfolds.. I feel like they can be good for each other, both dealing with mental shit and all that so they'll understand one another
Not bad. Everyone, save for flashback lady, gets some form of characterization. The models are great too, completely different from what I usually see. Can't wait to see more.
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I saw some gameplay on phub sounds like a promising game wishing for the update thou. Love the storyline thou' even without the seggs part I think this game will get a thousand of playersl at steam
dead game?
No, I'm cooking.
after 4 months now ur definitely not cooking buddy
I wanted to ask , is this girl from the game ???? can someone answer my question
No.
harem or one girl kinda deal?
Me whenever I see the MC on screen:
Is the dude at risk of being cheated on? If so, OOOOOFF. Rip my guy.
Thank you :)
Tried this a few months back, and now... android file doesnt work. Says its invalid.
So no more Android?
Very unique in its approach to the genre. Humorous but well-placed to maintain tension. Interesting but not contrived. Some plot twists are risky but I applaud this! Characters seem well written and interesting so far. Protagonist too, even - rare to see!
Some typos. Dialogue might be from a non-native English-speaker? Very minor gripe and I am extremely picky about this kind of thing.
So sick of seeing the same copy-paste games one after another. Glad I gave this one a shot! Really enjoyed it so far. I'm looking forward to what comes next.
This game has a lot of potential but the story could use a lot more work.This game has a lot of potential but the story could use a lot more work.
Hello o/ I don't know if that question was asked here before, but i'll ask nonetheless. Is Derealization gonna be available on Steam platform?
As soon as the first two episodes are completed, the game will most likely appear on Steam.
When is update 0.0.4a coming plz it been 9 month
Soon.
bro wasn't lying
This is great! I'm really excited for more. It's really interesting to play a character like this.
Is this abandoned?
No it is not.
cheating is mainly considered as NTR
NTR is when a woman systematically cheats on a man, while the man becomes aware of it. I specifically wrote cheating because the MC will be able to cheat on his chosen one. Not the opposite.
Tbh, i just played this for the first time thinking it will be "your generic VN", a guy with some girls and you know the drill dude. but actually it turned to be way better than what i initially thought, i like the fact that the mc "for once" is actually an interesting character. the renders are great and the story is very good so far, i'll definitely keep a close eye for future updates
I feel it's off to a great start but as noted by another player, there's some seriously wonky text. There are passages that makes no sense and conversations that seem to be translated into english via Google. You have a potentially really good VN here but it needs a native english translator.
High quality content so far, so many games misses the mark on the MC. you have written a great MC! lovely girls too :D! cant wait to see what happens next
Thank you!
I have a question Dev,
Why are you making Derealization a harem game ?
I mean you created a realistic world, so why spoil it with harem.
It will not be a harem in the literal sense of the word.
At a certain point, the main character will approach the period of time when he will have the opportunity (depending on the player choice) to be in a relationship with all the girls at the same time without them knowing of MC infidelity. So the harem in this case is a very technical expression and just a fitting tag.
I am glad that you are giving us the opportunity to choose whether we want harem or not.
Anyway, I really liked your writing and the way you wrote Derealization's MC is amazing.
Thanks!
i tried installing ur game on android but it says package appears to be invalid
Try one of this.
https://mixdrop.co/f/wn04p0w3h0g7jqn - MixDrop.
https://anonfiles.com/z3MbN4J6x5 - Anonfiles.
i tried the other two but its the same result
Well, in that case, I can only suggest to wait for the next version.
New story with new characters. Both are looking good. Very few grammar issues, nothing to take away from the story line. Not many choices to start out with but it feels like the developer is creating his story/game and needs certain steps to happen in order to make it all work. Likely updates will have more choice matters decisions. Worth a walk through.
Is the game still in development or abandoned?
Still in development.
Not every character is gonna be perfect, this guy is going through life as best as he can. I like what I've seen so far, aside from the grammar.
I want to like this...I really do.
I generally like where the story is going (or at least where it appears to be going), but reading the dialogue/monologue is like attempting to decipher a foreign language. So damned difficult, and sometimes it makes no sense at all. I keep thinking to myself, "damn, how I could help this developer with the language." This does need someone to completely edit the sentences so that the great scenes and renders come together more cohesively. As it stands, I am giving this a 6 out of 10, and can only hope the developer opts to have proficient native English speakers edit the written portion of this VN.
Is there a difference between 0.0.2 and 0.0.3a? My old last saved status was on the roof with drunk chloe. But 0.0.3a don't lead any further.
Prologue was expanded.
Will the blackmail be optional when you add it?
Yes, it will be optional.
I like how cheating is a planned topic, and NTR isn't. They're both literally the same thing... In a way.. but regardless might be a good VN ngl.
By "Cheating " I mean that the player (MC) may not be completely loyal to one girl.
Huh, never expected a reply from the creator. To be honest that should've been obvious, guess I kinda gunned that thought down before it even appeared.
I keep getting update notifications for this game, but the version is still 0.0.2 for all of them, and I don't see any change log here either. Is it really being updated with new content, or is it just bugs being fixed and stuff like that?
Bugs fix and stuff. Any updates with even the slightest amount of content will contain version numbers.
Good work so far! I really loved the character development with the MC. Getting into his perspective is making this a great read. Just clean up on some language and punctuation (Editing help?) and this will be a hit. Keep it up and looking forward to more!
yup. Agreed. Punctuation and language issues can be bothersome and take away from the great story and art. Great editors are out there. English Writing major right here, and I guarantee others are SMEs, too. We’d be happy to assist bringing this to next level. Cheers!
Flipping fantastic so far, pretty good for just an intro.. Quality is great and I'm already invested.. Cant wiat to see how the development of of MCs relationship with Sidney unfolds.. I feel like they can be good for each other, both dealing with mental shit and all that so they'll understand one another
Renders are nice Writing is nice.
But there is some missing :D where is 0.0.2 :D JK
na keep it up like the style of it cant wait for more :P
Looks promising so far. I really liked Jilla and her looks. Can't wait to see more.
Not bad. Everyone, save for flashback lady, gets some form of characterization. The models are great too, completely different from what I usually see. Can't wait to see more.